I can go with that, thanks for your comments Mat, hope life is treating you well!

Thanks Mat! I felt I wanted to keep the first person reference in the middle however I added quotation marks to define the purpose a little more succinctly.

Flyer On the Windscreen You get back to your car Laden with produce The aisles of brand names weighing now upon your finger tips Pained by lack of circulation You drop your goods into your trunk You note the car next to yours has parked inadequately Curse the waves of folk out there Who don't do It ...

Five Minutes Before Arrival. And upon the waking hour When I turn to the pillow next to mine, Away from the dreams of descent and delusion, Perhaps smelling the perfume of someone Who once had rested their head next to mine The heating blowing the dust, and the cool night air from the room And my lu...

Fever. My seagull flies Out three kilometres Over the vase blue sea My sun burns evermore so Threatening me My moon pales by comparison To my new achievements. My 4WD bumps along Over new and old road kill I smile, don't ask me why I smile, like a dill. Providence supplied us Bounty Honesty denied m...

Thank you CTG for the editorial notes, sorry I've taken so long to catch up with them. Thank you Diane and Christopher for the kind words and support, I hope you both are travelling well.

Mind slumbers An angelic light falls to earth With only shadow movement to denote Life The rush of the wind in the thirsty Plane tree The traffic tuned-in To radio men and women Who sell their personalities In lieu of else to give The puddles wait for shivers As my soul sails beyond the brink Return...

Sunday There was no motion That wasn't monitored. I stated this the other day, Sunday. Back when I was little there were no Services on a Sunday Now I don't think days warrant names Nor actions warrant mentioning As they are all mute To this plastic cup existence Filled with the sweat of work Then p...

I enjoyed your poem a lot Adam, straight to the point, amazing how some people seem to miss it still! Hope you and everyone is doing super.

Well felt Sherry, and timed so nicely. A world without women, twould last 100 years tops but in consideration possibly no longer than a day. Hope you are well, and very pleased to be able to read your excellent writing.

taut, yes. lol. But will change it to tensed.

As far as exploring the issues, I'm happy with my accomplishment in that regard - simply to invite the reader to investigate their own ideas, perhaps even challange their own assumptions.

Thanks for the spell check Lizzy.

Ambiguous, open to interpretation, relative; I wasn't there anymore than you were there Lizzy. Since reading your two posts I've considered redefining this piece but after some consideration am a lot happier to see how it can be defined personally by the reader. I do write confessional poetry and ha...

Thank you for your concern Lizzy, but rest assured I can take care of myself (or at least I don't hitchhike). I hoped this piece was ambivalent and open to many interpretations, and from your response I can gather that it is. For me the driver was making a confession, not a proposition. Anywho, hope...

Admissions Driving through the twilight A full moon shadow over brow He tells me of the time on ecstasy When He withered in sexual perversions The car and conversation move on My legs tensed as though It were my reactions that might save us From an accident and death. Then I thanked him for the lift...

Probably.