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by Inam
Sun Dec 02, 2007 2:01 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Jazz Ghosts - Comments Welcome
Replies: 1
Views: 508

Jazz Ghosts - Comments Welcome

Jazz Ghosts The leopard runs through the city the night reveals some of its claws my soul remembers a corner where gamblers dealt bullets and you dance like a rebel wife in your private chamber in that dark space the only light comes from your spine the leopard gets tired clawing at the walls in ve...
by Inam
Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:18 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: My Fingers Are Blades
Replies: 7
Views: 1611

Re: My Fingers Are Blades

@Boss: Does it look like I am treating them like furniture? :D
by Inam
Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:16 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Scarlet - Comments Welcome
Replies: 9
Views: 1590

Scarlet - Comments Welcome

Scarlet I have seen the eyes. The eyes. of the scarlet girl… the eyes that speak to storms and nomads… the eyes that fly in the jaguar’s dream the eyes that summon soldiers and deep kisses … I shall move in those eyes like a shaft of light… and ask you the language of dreams… Scarlet girl… I can sm...
by Inam
Thu Nov 22, 2007 2:18 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: My Fingers Are Blades
Replies: 7
Views: 1611

Re: My Fingers Are Blades

@raugust7: Hey I really appreciate your feedback. Feels real nice :)
by Inam
Mon Nov 19, 2007 8:53 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: When you come
Replies: 9
Views: 1726

Re: When you come

I did think it was retelling and remixing of Paul Simon's "Bridge Over Troubled Water" and Cohen's "I'm Your Man", though it has been fitted into a more domestic context, for which I credit the poet.
by Inam
Mon Nov 19, 2007 8:42 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: My Fingers Are Blades
Replies: 7
Views: 1611

Re: My Fingers Are Blades

@ Jimmy: hey thanks so much for taking time out to read this :)

I used "also" more as a transition point between the two diferrent tones that the poem juztaposes. But you may be right.
by Inam
Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:25 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: My Fingers Are Blades
Replies: 7
Views: 1611

My Fingers Are Blades

My fingers are blades
That slice mythologies

My fingers also worship your thighs.

My fingers are blades
That slice dictators

My fingers also remember
To stroke the thousand moons

Inside your soft, dark body.





http://inam-poetry.blogspot.com
by Inam
Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:33 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Hall of Blue Jazz - Comments Requested!!
Replies: 6
Views: 1167

Re: The Hall of Blue Jazz - Comments Requested!!

@lizzy: Gosh i aint even aware of this news!!! You see, here in India we dont get to know all thats happening out there. So CSA is totally out of the question, as far as this poem is concerned...though i did write a poem once for a newspaper here which tackled CSA and forced incest. and another one ...
by Inam
Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:13 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Hall of Blue Jazz - Comments Requested!!
Replies: 6
Views: 1167

The Hall of Blue Jazz - Comments Requested!!

The Hall of Blue Jazz -dedicated to Chick Corea 1. The priest strokes the organ his music curves around the soul of ants. a glass of water beside him now and then, a blue egg falls into the glass and cracks, then the keys of his organ recognize the scent of river gods… who wanted his body so many t...
by Inam
Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:50 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Comp. Poem - Shreds
Replies: 2
Views: 751

Re: Comp. Poem - Shreds

of course!! :) a bit too late i guess heh .... so wat were the prizes like ... i can guess ;-)
by Inam
Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:36 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Comp. Poem - Shreds
Replies: 2
Views: 751

Comp. Poem - Shreds

Hey i'm quite new here...no idea how the competition works or even where to actually post. anyways, i'm posting something here called 'Shreds' for the Comp. had earlier posted something called 'Lines for Leonard' in this forum. Will that count too? Shreds the last train snakes away the last train of...
by Inam
Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:24 pm
Forum: News
Topic: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LEONARD!!!
Replies: 115
Views: 42775

Lines for Leonard - on your birthday

Here's something I wrote for you Leonard....and while i am posting this, there's "I Can't Forget" playing ... I wish I could write better...I wish. Lines for Leonard -for L. Cohen on his birthday, 21st September Suzanne takes you down to her mansion of pearls… blood pearls grace the violin...
by Inam
Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:11 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Lines for Leonard - on his birthday
Replies: 3
Views: 732

Re: Lines for Leonard - on his birthday

Hey thanks!!!! yes, will do so immediately :)
by Inam
Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:27 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Lines for Leonard - on his birthday
Replies: 3
Views: 732

Lines for Leonard - on his birthday

Lines for Leonard -for L. Cohen on his birthday, 21st September Suzanne takes you down to her mansion of pearls… blood pearls grace the violin the psalm of death is heard and the scent of kisses, submarine you discover the lovers moving on crutches… exploring the water songs dragging their wings li...

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