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by lightedpalace
Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:59 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Memories
Replies: 1
Views: 558

Memories

I knew a girl who was the most fascinating boy you'll ever meet. I stared hard, hoping her nipples would cease to seem so obscene against her flat chest, visible through a button-down pinstriped shirt. Those full, firm nipples. "You could hang a candy-cane off one of those." my girlfriend ...
by lightedpalace
Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:54 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Looking for Leonard Cohen (Song)
Replies: 18
Views: 6047

Re: Looking for Leonard Cohen (Song)

Aw, this is just LOVELY. Thanks Wendy! I feel it, lady. Grand work :D
by lightedpalace
Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:50 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: I’m going to swallow myself.
Replies: 13
Views: 2341

Re: I’m going to swallow myself.

This is a gorgeous little word-creature, Cate. I felt every blue-gold finger of it, walking down my spine.
by lightedpalace
Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:48 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Windows
Replies: 2
Views: 710

Windows

We thought we knew what we wanted. Compelling connections to be explored as swift as swallows fly; sparks exploding into stars, making pyres of our young bodies. We knew what we thought we wanted. Fearful of endings we tried to live at the speed of light & outran our selves. Gathering up everyth...
by lightedpalace
Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:14 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: not a bitter declaration
Replies: 7
Views: 1133

Re: not a bitter declaration

Eunuchs have sleeves made of hearts.
by lightedpalace
Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:46 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: not a bitter declaration
Replies: 7
Views: 1133

Re: not a bitter declaration

The impact probably wouldn't be so intense if it had hit below the belt in my case. You see, I am a eunuch. Had I balls I'm sure that's where the blow would have fallen, & I'd be writhing in front of my computer, cursing your name.

<3
by lightedpalace
Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:44 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Let me not pretend
Replies: 2
Views: 649

Re: a poem inspired by a line...

Hi imaginary friend! Thanks for responding. a little voice keeps insisting that many times, he's writing about his Muse; not a real life, human one, rather the elusive creative spirit which, for Leonard, is female; this I believe. I follow the BOM threads (unqualified there too :-)) and sometimes I ...
by lightedpalace
Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:27 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: For His Beautiful Losers
Replies: 1
Views: 586

Re: For His Beautiful Losers

This is EXCELLENT. Thank you for sharing it!

- Siobhan
by lightedpalace
Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:06 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: not a bitter declaration
Replies: 7
Views: 1133

Re: not a bitter declaration

This piece hit me in the guts. I feel like both the writer & the subject. Your deft manipulation of words is beautiful to behold. Thank you.
by lightedpalace
Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:57 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Let me not pretend
Replies: 2
Views: 649

Let me not pretend

A poem inspired by a line from a poem in the Book of Mercy. I am grateful in advance for any constructive criticism you may have to offer. Thank you. Let me not pretend you stand beside me. You are a field of wildflowers lending your fragrance to the passing wind. You can never walk beside me, but I...
by lightedpalace
Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:23 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Militant Wing
Replies: 102
Views: 16570

Re: Militant Wing

Lightedpalace....be careful. This is militia territory and not everyone has forgotten that you used the word: "shards" in your latest poem. 8) *laughs* ohhhhyeah. i'm really asking for trouble with that sort of thing. :P perhaps now's the time to invest in that crash helmet i've always wa...
by lightedpalace
Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:28 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Militant Wing
Replies: 102
Views: 16570

Re: Militant Wing

it appears there's some kind of war being waged here in Poetry Land... i'm thinking some of the The Man's immortal words may be of use in this situation:

"Love's the only engine of survival."

*cackles maniacally and weaves a basket*
by lightedpalace
Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:23 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: waiting in the wings
Replies: 2
Views: 752

Re: waiting in the wings

I'm not sure if it belongs either - maybe it's two poems. I'm interested to hear what other people might think. yeah, i was thinking that the first stanza might be the beginning (or middle, or end; who knows?) of a different poem all together. the second two stanzas seem fairly complete unto themse...
by lightedpalace
Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:41 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: waiting in the wings
Replies: 2
Views: 752

waiting in the wings

...she waits for wings. i'm not sure the first stanza belongs here, or if it should be set aside. let me know what you think. all feedback is appreciated. toxins create a membrane, cloistering my awareness. clausterphobia. clusterfucks. closet-cases. clash. waiting for lightning i am looking forward...
by lightedpalace
Mon Feb 11, 2008 8:08 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: A Letter
Replies: 15
Views: 2608

Re: A Letter

your daughter's on the ball.

and it was flies all a long.
never lies. that'd be wrong.

oh boy.
good night.

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