I have read several volumes

of Alden Nowlans

unique works

and I feel that I know the man, personally

he is my friend

I never knew Shakespeare

i used to float down streets of gray past coin laundry houses i never lingered i never watched the twirling whirlpools of patience life was simple life was a sleeping dog and all sleeping dogs awaken now these suds run far and deep and my hands are stained with bleach i am spinning hopelessly in the...

Far better than tv...

Very nice

Thanks, I really like the edit.

irresistible, the melody of your song the unaffordable luxury I look upon you, longingly seeking salvation from your smile, or warmth in your caress I crave your gentle touch I recall your cool hands brushing the hair from my gaunt cheek as you consumed me, bit by bit you are the conqueror a thief o...

I like it lot as well.

she’s a question without answer little dreamer, little dancer and she’s dancing on a shattered hourglass she fell victim to that fashion no love but lots of passion and when she fell she landed on her ass man you’ve got that personality crisis man you’ve got that personality flaw oh, man you’ve got ...

It's like a photograph of words.

I like this.
Humour with very subtle hints of sadness?

Nicely done Sir!!!

a fleeting thought pools as a single droplet of water a luminous tear ebbs a neglected son, a mocking daughter a crimson blemish taints asphalt mingles, shards of glass, depressed steel and jumbles of smoldering grass trauma, pain scars to heal confusion, fear they prey, they kneel an indifferent mo...

This really sounds quite interesting. I would love to see them perform.

fishfishquaileye wrote:

hophead wrote:A very nice and atmospheric, my kind of poem.

you say that, and yet you have failed to comment for nearly 10 years since she posted it. hard to think of any mitigation for your neglect.

I was misguided...

Very nice and atmospheric, my kind of poem.