J- Excellent piece of writing. I think that just about anyone could relate to the feelings you have drawn here. Great work.

Hey George- I really dig this poem. Many beautiful questions raised. Great work.

Thanks you all. Fourth person... that is interesting, not intentional but very interesting.

Jesus Was a Capricorn- Kris Kristofferson

I hope Partisan is kidding because, otherwise, he is a prick.

I am a bit disappointed. I value the crit of you all. This site tends to never give a negative reply of poetry, which is very kind, but not constructive. No reply feels much worse than negative feedback. :? To my friends here, I have changed my name because of privacy fears, but my signature remains...

Cool piece Vegard. Those damn christians, what they need is one good bumper-sticker.

Here's an idea for one: "They don't make Jews like Jesus anymore"

Leave the dust on the offerings for roses of changes, gardens of sand with the love that has made them. The stones are praying in fire of morning for children who know of this coming evening. Leave me alone with my pride and my envy, my blade for the bleeding of love from the promise. In books they ...

Can Our Love- Tindersticks

They go well with bacon-butter salad...

Sandra wrote: In the air remain
Your other traits that I myself ignore
Or those I did not see

Hey Sandra- I like your poem very much. The three lines above have a very cool rhythm. I think your english is beautiful.

Nice AH. You are right about the streets...

Hey George- Wonderful images, the style, in a way makes me read the words at an accelerated pace. Very nice.