Haiku Corner.

[jimbo]

Thank you Cate.............................

[CeeCeeMira]

reptilian flurry
wild parrots lifting as one
voice of devotion

[jimbo]

Its your soft brown eyes
your smile like a summers dawn
that have stole my heart

[jimbo]

your lips are like roses
with my arms around your waist
you can draw my blood

[jimbo]

When our moon did smile
and we embraced by the stream
my forever dream

[jimbo]

as summer rises
our birds chattering in trees
and dancing on wires

thank you Byron

[Byron]

as the summer rises
our birds chattering in trees
and dancing on wires

as summer rises
our birds chattering in trees
dancing on wires

[Cate]

warmth from my child's
body, lulls me back to sleep
morning can wait

[jimbo]

can i hold your hand
childrens love is eternal
mornings forever

[Byron]

cate, that seems to be a 4 - 7 - 4 ?

[Cate]

It's 5 - 7 -4

I didn't have another syllable to say.

Here's one that is even shorter, I had to add the word my to make it to 12 syllables. So I've got nature - I've got a season - I've got the syllables but I don't think I have a haiku yet - my description is still lacking, although it describes a moment well for me it wouldn't for the reader.

winter morning

mint tea warms
my hands, snow falls
you smile
warmth spreads

[Ladybythetrack]

but I don't think I have a haiku yet - my description is still lacking, although it describes a moment well for me it wouldn't for the reader.

winter morning

mint tea warms
my hands, snow falls
you smile
warmth spreads

I disagree, I can see it & I like it

[jimbo]

warmt spreads openly
between us all upwards bound
just can we hold it.......

[jimbo]

the stars burn tonight
the wind slow but not so slow
as rapid tempests

[friscogrl]

As rapid tempests
In fine porcelain teapots
trapped no where to go