a life slowly melting

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Steve Wilcox
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a life slowly melting

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CeeCeeMira
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!!!!! Soooo good!
chinese incense laced with yin,
traced the gaps between our skin
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abby
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I thought it was very good too. I wrote down:

chinese incense laced with yin,
traced the gaps between our skin
the lantern stole my final glimpse
in spite i haven’t burned it since

, and put it on my refrigerator.

Abby
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Re: a life slowly melting

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And what happened then, Abby........? ;-)
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