The Infinite Haiku

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i know where ya live
what yu eat and how you sleep
ecce Agnus Dei,
love is not forgotten......
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ecce Agnus Dei
lies awake beside lion
planning his escape
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planning his escape,
the infinite haiku has
become so boring
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become so boring -
as Buzz Lightyear recommends
we should go beyond
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.

from Wild Geese
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beyound the pale, or
beyound the graves of olde
some stories fortold.
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some stories foretold
ah but strangely omitted
the Crystal Ball Ball
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love is not forgotten......
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wind beneath the sea
currents that toss the dark clouds
shag navigates all
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Shag navigates all
Womans beauty conquers all
Men fall one by one
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
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men fall one by one
and the summer not begun
benedicimus
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benedicimus!
the drizzle and fog of home
blesses sun-scorched skin

Anne
newfoundland--understand?
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I realized "Blesses" is an awkward way to start a new haiku, so I have altered it slightly as follows:


Benedicimus!
the drizzle and fog of home
blessing sun-scorched skin
newfoundland--understand?
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Blessing sun scorched skin
while my legs are very pale
but my heart is warm
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tinderella53 wrote:Blessing sun scorched skin
while my legs are very pale
but my heart is warm
damn! for over 2 months the worst ever thread on this forum lay dying, then on Remembrance Sunday.....
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