Haiku Corner.

[jimbo]

you take care of me
and ill wash your hands with mine
sweet summer of dreams

[jimbo]

trudge through knee deep snow
cold air fills our gasping lungs
winters kiss bites cheeks

hope you didnt mind this Cate

the basic rule is 3 lines 5/7/5 syllables

[lizzytysh]

[Your infinite haiku is very funny about the lion liking all the digits rare .]

[jimbo]

its specialy for Mickey one on his visit to the zoo......he is a rare one..................

[lizzytysh]

'cept he's not at the zoo... he's on a safari .

[Cate]

quote]hope you didnt mind this Cate[/quote]

Not at all, I'm very glad to be rid of the last line, it didn't fit for me. I like the word gasping, " gasping lungs" that feels right. Thank you I'm going to use the word my instead of our though as this was a solitary moment for myself and lady winter.

trudge through, knee deep snow
cold air fills my gasping lungs
winters kiss bites cheeks


I'm not sure about the comma I added, "trudge through" was actually my self commentary as I moved through the snow - but a reader wouldn't know that so maybe it shouldn't be there.

[Cate]

sweet summer of dreams
we float in tranquil waters
lost inhibitions

[Red Poppy]

lost inhibitions,
lost shoes, lost map, lost my way.
it appears I'm lost

[Cate]

Thats very funny, I like it

It appears I'm lost
sign said souls for sale fifth floor
all I found was shoes

[lizzytysh]

all I found was shoes
"Yard Sale of Century" sign
Imelda Marcos

[Cate]

Imelda Marcos
footwear pilgrims assembled
at her six inch shrine

[lizzytysh]

at her six-inch shrine
perhaps, therein, a reason
for high-heel fetish?

[jimbo]

for high heel fetish
the journey becomes sweeter
the longer her legs

[Cate]

the longer her legs
lingered, curled against my skin
the further home seemed

[jimbo]

the further home seemed
in my dreams of the future
I did'nt have one