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those not matching ours
will be pushed to one side
conform to the norn

conform to the norns
in whose hands we place our fate,
roll the dice ladies.

roll the dice ladies
two sixes wins the tickets
my last chance Dublin

my last chance Dublin
I hope my friend gets tickets
close my eyes tight - WISH

closed my eyes tight wished
up up and away;yes Dublin
two seats my son and i

jimbo wrote:closed my eyes tight wished
up up and away;yes Dublin
two seats my son and i

two seats my son and
I notice you can not count
obey the rules, mate

Sideways wrote:

jimbo wrote:closed my eyes tight wished
up up and away;yes Dublin
two seats my son and i

two seats my son and
I notice you can not count
obey the rules, mate

obey the rules mate
when your dizzy counting sucks
check my other hundred

[quote="jimbo"
obey the rules mate
when your dizzy counting sucks
check my other hundred[/quote]

how the judges let you get away with blatant cheating is beyond me, and why you boast about it is also incomprehensible. I can not imagine Leonard Cohen himself approving of your deceptions. What if someone who is inexperienced with haikus relied on your integrity and performed one of your pieces in public? They would be utterly humiliated.

do you always look at every thing Sideways.......????
lighten up......
i have fun .the rules are 5-7-5..........
but you can write any small verse between 12 and 17 syl

and this is the fun version of the game

the haiku corner is where the more serious stuff is

why dont you try some there Expert................

Expert

My Grandaddy used to say, "An Ex- is a has-been, and a spert is a drip under pressure."

obey the rules mate
when your dizzy counting sucks
check my other hundred

Check my other hundred
My counting says there's six, mate
But what do I care?

But what do I care
But for the light in your eyes
Where I see beauty

friscogrl wrote:But what do I care
But for the light in your eyes
Where I see beauty

Where I see beauty
In souls, from illusion freed
In peace live with pain

In peace live with pain
Take courage, remain the same
Curse and curse again

curse and curse again
the high lack of harmony
in songs of the wind