do i detect veiled sarcasm here? do you not recognise when a stick is being pushed into the spokes of a wheel, lisa? you will agree that haiku is the most banal form of poetry; i was merely trying to lead the cattle over the nearest cliff.LisaLCFan wrote:That is really lovely. Have you ever considered writing greeting cards? Who wouldn't want to receive a card so full of such poetic charm?
Haiku Corner.
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doused in gasoline
i was placed to burn alive
toes were left unharmed
i was placed to burn alive
toes were left unharmed
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Toes were left unharmed
Still following the same path
Spirit flying free
Still following the same path
Spirit flying free
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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spirit flying freeKarren B wrote:Toes were left unharmed
Still following the same path
Spirit flying free
like ejaculated sperm
from a lonely prick
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From a lonely prick
Sleeping beauty’s fate was sealed,
Hope her prince comes soon
Sleeping beauty’s fate was sealed,
Hope her prince comes soon
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Hope her prince comes soon
Dashing through the countryside
He tripped on a rock
Dashing through the countryside
He tripped on a rock
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Karren B
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He tripped on a rock
But should have stuck to ganja;
Bad journey ahead
But should have stuck to ganja;
Bad journey ahead
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Bad journey ahead
"Andromeda" Bub said
She took him so deep like a song
"Andromeda" Bub said
She took him so deep like a song
'In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer' - Albert Camus
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bad journey aheadKarren B wrote:He tripped on a rock
But should have stuck to ganja;
Bad journey ahead
he thought, as he shot his load
high into the air
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Karren B
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Nice to see you G. 
High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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nice to see you as well, karren.Karren B wrote:Nice to see you G.
High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
hot lava sprang forth
landing down on his trousers
and he felt better
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Not sure if anyone would feel better with hot lava down their trousers,Geoffrey wrote:nice to see you as well, karren.Karren B wrote:Nice to see you G.
High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
hot lava sprang forth
landing down on his trousers
and he felt better
(I suggest you try nothing hotter than candle wax). 
And he felt better
Now; undone, untied, released
Exhausted and spent
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Karren B wrote:
>Not sure if anyone would feel better with hot lava down their trousers. (I suggest you try nothing hotter than candle wax)
be careful, karren. there are quite a few deviants in here, and you could be giving them ideas.
>And he felt better
>Now; undone, untied, released
>Exhausted and spent
exhausted and spent
he put his pet snake to bed
and pulled up the zip
>Not sure if anyone would feel better with hot lava down their trousers. (I suggest you try nothing hotter than candle wax)
be careful, karren. there are quite a few deviants in here, and you could be giving them ideas.
>And he felt better
>Now; undone, untied, released
>Exhausted and spent
exhausted and spent
he put his pet snake to bed
and pulled up the zip
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He pulled up the zip
Of the dusty garment bag
Revealing the dress.
(artistic licence employed: changed "and" to "he". If you can skip someone's poem, I can change a word!)
Of the dusty garment bag
Revealing the dress.
(artistic licence employed: changed "and" to "he". If you can skip someone's poem, I can change a word!)
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boss' contribution was disqualified due to failure to adhere to the strict '5-7-5 syllable' rule.
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