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Geoffrey wrote
be careful, karren. there are quite a few deviants in here, and you could be giving them ideas.

I am shocked to hear this G! Can't believe such people could be found here in the back room of the forum.

Geoffrey wrote:boss' contribution was disqualified due to failure to adhere to the strict '5-7-5 syllable' rule.

And there's me thinking I was the only one here to demand complete compliance.

LisaLCFan wrote:He pulled up the zip
Of the dusty garment bag
Revealing the dress.

(artistic licence employed: changed "and" to "he". If you can skip someone's poem, I can change a word!)

Revealing the dress,
a lone thought escaped his eye
and rolled down his cheek

Karren B wrote: Revealing the dress,
a lone thought escaped his eye
and rolled down his cheek

and rolled down his cheek
as he cut off his two legs
and then shot himself

And then shot himself.
With a sharp gasp, he awoke.
It was just a dream.

LisaLCFan wrote:And then shot himself.
With a sharp gasp, he awoke.
It was just a dream.

It was just a dream;
a beautiful, painless dream
till it was over.

Till it was over,
Silent they remained. And then,
Applause like thunder.

LisaLCFan wrote:Till it was over,
Silent they remained. And then,
Applause like thunder.

Applause like thunder.
then a big meteorite
smashed the earth to bits.

Geoffrey wrote:Applause like thunder.
then a big meteorite
smashed the earth to bits.

Smashed the earth to bits,
To save the universe from
Geoffrey's dismal verse.

LisaLCFan wrote

Smashed the earth to bits,
To save the universe from
Geoffrey's dismal verse

Geoffrey's dismal verse
portrays his haiku hatred,
but still makes me smile.

well i
am back
my haiku skills intack
lets just
p onder

dawn is breaking now
birds singng on the wing
sun smouldering low