The Infinite Haiku

[lizzytysh]

lost but she knows love
living out her life alone
acceptance comes first

[Marisha]

lost but she knows love
living out her life alone
acceptance comes first

acceptance comes first
rejection comes quite soon after
mutual orgasms

[lizzytysh]

Whoops, Marisha ~ at least in the way I'm saying them... the middle one for sure; your middle line is 8 and your last line is 6. Very interesting continuation and development on the line, regardless .

We may need the Grecian Man, originator of the thread, to clarify on the syllables... visual, literal, or spoken.

[Marisha]

Whoops, Marisha ~ at least in the way I'm saying them... the middle one for sure; your middle line is 8 and your last line is 6. Very interesting continuation and development on the line, regardless .

We may need the Grecian Man, originator of the thread, to clarify on the syllables... visual, literal, or spoken.

thanks, I can't count!

here it is, with only 7 in the middle line (the "quite" was a filler I never needed!), and 5 in my count for the last but with very proper pronunciation I cna understand why you said it was 6. I am saying it as "muooo tchall"


acceptance comes first
rejection comes soon after
mutual orgasms

[lizzytysh]

mutual orgasms
all so individual
counting no import

[Gullivor]

counting no import
victory over hatred
lets talk about love

[anneporter]

Let's talk about love-
in-a-mist, love-lies-bleeding:
a gardener dreams

[anneporter]

This paraphrase popped into my head while I was showering--I thought of changing the last post but people may have already seen it so I'll offer this alternative (apologies to the master):

let's talk about love
not chains we cannot untie
eyes soft with sorrow

[suzanneorange]

I'll see what's behind door # 1:

Let's talk about love-
in-a-mist, love-lies-bleeding:
a gardener dreams

a gardener dreams
after rooting out weeds: a
red geranium

[Marisha]

red geranium
read a book as well, some leaves
in common, bye bye

[anneporter]

in common:"Bye-bye!"
baby delights in waving;
her neighbour waves back.

[Marisha]

in common:"Bye-bye!"
baby delights in waving;
her neighbour waves back.

her neigbour waves back
to the lifeguard but still drowns
next door now empty

[Gullivor]

next door now empty
time now for some endless love
house is full again

[anneporter]

house is full again
children rush out with treasure:
bright plastic flowers!

[Marisha]

house is full again
children rush out with treasure:
bright plastic flowers!

bright plastic flowers
dull taste in décor, I prefer
bright plastic surgeons


Ps I am married to one, so I had to say that or he would change my nose in the middle of the night, without my consent!