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lost but she knows love
living out her life alone
acceptance comes first

lizzytysh wrote:lost but she knows love
living out her life alone
acceptance comes first

acceptance comes first
rejection comes quite soon after
mutual orgasms

Whoops, Marisha ~ at least in the way I'm saying them... the middle one for sure; your middle line is 8 and your last line is 6. Very interesting continuation and development on the line, regardless .

We may need the Grecian Man, originator of the thread, to clarify on the syllables... visual, literal, or spoken.

lizzytysh wrote:Whoops, Marisha ~ at least in the way I'm saying them... the middle one for sure; your middle line is 8 and your last line is 6. Very interesting continuation and development on the line, regardless .

We may need the Grecian Man, originator of the thread, to clarify on the syllables... visual, literal, or spoken.

thanks, I can't count!

here it is, with only 7 in the middle line (the "quite" was a filler I never needed!), and 5 in my count for the last but with very proper pronunciation I cna understand why you said it was 6. I am saying it as "muooo tchall"


acceptance comes first
rejection comes soon after
mutual orgasms

mutual orgasms
all so individual
counting no import

counting no import
victory over hatred
lets talk about love

Let's talk about love-
in-a-mist, love-lies-bleeding:
a gardener dreams

This paraphrase popped into my head while I was showering--I thought of changing the last post but people may have already seen it so I'll offer this alternative (apologies to the master):

let's talk about love
not chains we cannot untie
eyes soft with sorrow

I'll see what's behind door # 1:

anneporter wrote:Let's talk about love-
in-a-mist, love-lies-bleeding:
a gardener dreams

a gardener dreams
after rooting out weeds: a
red geranium

red geranium
read a book as well, some leaves
in common, bye bye

in common:"Bye-bye!"
baby delights in waving;
her neighbour waves back.

anneporter wrote:in common:"Bye-bye!"
baby delights in waving;
her neighbour waves back.

her neigbour waves back
to the lifeguard but still drowns
next door now empty

next door now empty
time now for some endless love
house is full again

house is full again
children rush out with treasure:
bright plastic flowers!

anneporter wrote:house is full again
children rush out with treasure:
bright plastic flowers!

bright plastic flowers
dull taste in décor, I prefer
bright plastic surgeons


Ps I am married to one, so I had to say that or he would change my nose in the middle of the night, without my consent!