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bright plastic surgeon
with the soul of an artist
painting by moonlight

{I took the liberty of changing "surgeons" to "surgeon" to honour my friend Donnie, a brilliant and funny plastic surgeon/artist/musician}

painting by moonlight
fainting by daylight no food
painting by moonlight

painting by moonlight
plastic faces sunken eyes
dead self-resurrect

dead self resurrects
walks back to the small bedroom
where he is waiting

suzanneorange wrote:dead self resurrects
walks back to the small bedroom
where he is waiting

where he is waiting
in a modest restaurant
waiting for his tips

waiting for his tips
she lines up for a taste of
blueberry shiraz

anneporter wrote:waiting for his tips
she lines up for a taste of
blueberry shiraz

blueberry shiraz
blackberry razamataz
communication

communication
husbands credit card pays bill
leaves generious tip

Gullivor wrote:communication
husbands credit card pays bill
leaves generious tip

leaves generous tip
after his circumcision
end of his penis

end of his penis
obsession: Jerry begins
to see the world

to see the world
instead of obsessing re:
eros/thanatos

eros/thanatos
sublimated to beauty
like ice to cold air

like ice to cold air
and hot water to warm air
is seven to four

is seven to four
a letter forms in my heart
before I write you

before I write you
I take my coffee outside
fragrant steam rising