Heretics?

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Georges
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Heretics?

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Heretics?
Keep moving down and fine
The text of this line
Keeping the beat with time
Watching the creatures, crawling and evolving out of the slime
Examining the universe in all of it's egg of the blue, speckled, wonder
Thor was a noisy God who was in charge of all the crack of that thunder


Letting the light of the illumance, enter into the ignorance of the dark
Dispelling all the rumours and the fables with the inspiration of the spark
Listening to the intricate and complex song of the summer lark
Measuring as the cosmic rays complicated the plan from the actual mark
As the naked Matador lay dead on the marble slab, in his nude of stark

What is the myth and what is the reality?
As we trundle down the paths of time, stumbling in our insanity?
We are blasphemers and we are of the sin of our own profanity
Keep moving and blazing, down
To the next anonymous and heretic town
Dressed as a bloody crossed and white clown

Keep moving down and fine
The Quest of the tainted and the sublime
Keep digging, under Solomon's temple, keep digging
You will return to Europe in that fancy rigging
The wealth and the riches of the Knight's Grail
Will turn Friday the thirteenth, to the inquisition and the flail.

Bahophet
Don't you forget............
The worshiping of the head of John the baptist
The clenching of the arm and of the fist........

Georges.
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Re: Heretics?

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a bloody crossed and white clown
I did like this turn of phrase, George(s). By the way, I don't think you want a comma after 'Thor'.
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Re: Heretics?

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James, I have removed the comma and thanks for the kind critique from yourself.

Georges.
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