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Pity

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 8:50 pm
by Everett Wade
Late at night,
When the wind sings like rustling wet leaves
Trying to dry themselves in the cold
Someone tells me something,
And although I understand
I would very much like not to.
Maybe you will understand this
Sometime, late at night
When the stars in the sky
Speak to the sick light of the pale street lamps
And the rising mist takes pity
On drifting cigarette smoke caught in the wind.
Maybe you will understand, but if not...
I will try not to reach too far in expecting.

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 9:19 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Ev,
I really like a lot of your images, and your using them to express your thoughts as you do. I sincerely trust that you will continue with your writing endeavours. When you're writing like this at 16, the future looks wonderful for the progress of your writing. Keep it up! :D
~Lizzytysh

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 9:26 pm
by Everett Wade
thanks lizzy, you are too kind.. =)
Ev

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 10:13 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Ev,

RE: #4 ~ Right.

RE: This one ~ Sometimes, perhaps; however, right on target this time.
Just keep putting those ideas, thoughts, and words on paper. :)

~Lizzytysh

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 10:59 am
by smile
very meaningful and interesting

To Everett

Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 11:09 am
by George.Wright
Good piece of writing, keep it up!!!!
Georges

Re: Pity

Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2022 1:41 am
by solongleonard
Dear Mr Wade, I am so sorry that you didn't get all your ducks in a Roe