I like birds
and I like bees
I like God
and I like ice cream.
I like to think I am a better writer nowadays but also you should never condemn a child when she does her best imho
this is a poem I wrote when I was 5
Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 5
Hi Marisha ~
Yours is very sweet and likely holds true.
I was eight, when I wrote this:
"Time for tarry
time for play
None have I
this busy day"
Little did I know that I was setting my mantra in motion, which still holds too true today. I should've stuck to the birds and bees, with G~d's blessings and a bowl of ice cream.
~ Lizzy
Yours is very sweet and likely holds true.
I was eight, when I wrote this:
"Time for tarry
time for play
None have I
this busy day"
Little did I know that I was setting my mantra in motion, which still holds too true today. I should've stuck to the birds and bees, with G~d's blessings and a bowl of ice cream.
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 37
Be careful
of people selling Ice Cream.
They'll steal your heart with
their purple eye shadow
and shameless sampling.
I also feel that I could write better, but I was distracted by some maple cream delight.
of people selling Ice Cream.
They'll steal your heart with
their purple eye shadow
and shameless sampling.
I also feel that I could write better, but I was distracted by some maple cream delight.
Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 5
i like this. it sounds like something from book of longing. no offence leonard.
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Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 37
Hi Cate, Simon here. You write as if you have had an ice-cream "experience"!Cate wrote:Be careful
of people selling Ice Cream.
They'll steal your heart with
their purple eye shadow
and shameless sampling.
I also feel that I could write better, but I was distracted by some maple cream delight.