this is a poem I wrote when I was 5

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Marisha
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this is a poem I wrote when I was 5

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I like birds
and I like bees
I like God
and I like ice cream.


I like to think I am a better writer nowadays but also you should never condemn a child when she does her best imho
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lizzytysh
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Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 5

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Hi Marisha ~

Yours is very sweet and likely holds true.

I was eight, when I wrote this:

"Time for tarry
time for play
None have I
this busy day"

Little did I know that I was setting my mantra in motion, which still holds too true today. I should've stuck to the birds and bees, with G~d's blessings and a bowl of ice cream.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
Cate
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Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 37

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Be careful

of people selling Ice Cream.
They'll steal your heart with
their purple eye shadow
and shameless sampling.


I also feel that I could write better, but I was distracted by some maple cream delight.
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Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 5

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i like this. it sounds like something from book of longing. no offence leonard.
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Re: this is a poem I wrote when I was 37

Post by Simon Says »

Cate wrote:Be careful

of people selling Ice Cream.
They'll steal your heart with
their purple eye shadow
and shameless sampling.


I also feel that I could write better, but I was distracted by some maple cream delight.
Hi Cate, Simon here. You write as if you have had an ice-cream "experience"!
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