Just when you think you’re immune.
You fill my mind, you fill my heart,
You are the reason that I breathe.
You give me strength, you give me hope,
You give me something to believe.
You touch my soul, you make me feel,
You taught me how to love once more.
You show me that true love is real,
A love that I’ve not had before.
I can’t believe that you are real,
I can’t believe I feel your touch.
I can’t believe I gave my heart,
I can’t believe I love that much.
I give my love, I give my soul;
I give my hopes, I give my dreams.
You wrap them up in thoughts of love
And give them back to me in reams.
I trust your judgement and your words.
I trust the loving things you say.
I trust the way you say you feel,
I trust you more each passing day!
I don’t know how long this will last,
I don’t know how long you will stay.
I don’t know how long you will feel
The way you feel for me today?
But I can tell you from my heart,
And I’ll assure you this is true,
I’ve never felt a love like this,
And all this love, I feel for you! …
Karren B
xx
Just adding this song suggested by lonndubh, i agree it's a good companion for the poem...
It's called 'I Got A Winner In You'
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-zGNp8YU_i8
Just when you think you’re immune.
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Just when you think you’re immune.
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
That is a beautiful poem, Karren
He's a very lucky guy!
Gerry
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He's a very lucky guy!
Gerry
xx
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Thank You Gerry
But I'm the lucky one!!!
Karren B
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But I'm the lucky one!!!
Karren B
xx
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
That was a very moving poem, Karren. Thank you for sharing. I would like to have written more, but have to meet two exceptionally nice women.
Last edited by Geoffrey on Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
Karren B wrote:Just when you think you’re immune.
You fill my mind, you fill my heart,
You are the reason that I breathe.
You give me strength, you give me hope,
You give me something to believe.
You touch my soul, you make me feel,
You taught me how to love once more.
You show me that true love is real,
A love that I’ve not had before.
I can’t believe that you are real,
I can’t believe I feel your touch.
I can’t believe I gave my heart,
I can’t believe I love that much.
I give my love, I give my soul;
I give my hopes, I give my dreams.
You wrap them up in thoughts of love
And give them back to me in reams.
I trust your judgement and your words.
I trust the loving things you say.
I trust the way you say you feel,
I trust you more each passing day!
I don’t know how long this will last,
I don’t know how long you will stay.
I don’t know how long you will feel
The way you feel for me today?
But I can tell you from my heart,
And I’ll assure you this is true,
I’ve never felt a love like this,
And all this love, I feel for you! …
Karren B
xx
Hi Karren.. it seems you're in an idyllic place right now.. cherish it..
v i o l e t xx x
Violet
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As wonderful as can be 
What a lovely poem Karren!
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What a lovely poem Karren! A
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Geoffrey - these sound like exceptionally nasty women to me
by Geoffrey » Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:29 pm
Lucky? Never trust them! It's a snare, a woman's textbook way of booby-trapping any passing fool. Sweeten him up with a soft surrendering personality, then after she's got her claws in the poor bugger and starts making his life Hell does the prize idiot wake up and realise that there's no way out, that his carefree days of cordiality and harmony are over. He's finished.
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'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
I think you are both very lucky!
I really like this poem Karren and think that you have expressed yourself beautifully.
I really like this poem Karren and think that you have expressed yourself beautifully.
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Dearest violet
It is an idyllic place I’m in and I will cherish every second I’m there!
xx
Hi Alsiony
Thank you for your comment…A very wise person told me to stop expecting the worst and enjoy the moment…They weren’t wrong!
Xx
Hi Cate
Thank you…I think fate has been kind for once… Glad you liked it.
xx
Karren B
xx
It is an idyllic place I’m in and I will cherish every second I’m there!
xx
Hi Alsiony
Thank you for your comment…A very wise person told me to stop expecting the worst and enjoy the moment…They weren’t wrong!
Xx
Hi Cate
Thank you…I think fate has been kind for once… Glad you liked it.
xx
Karren B
xx
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
Alsiony wrote:
>Geoffrey - these sound like exceptionally nasty women to me
No, they really are not that bad, my jealous friend.
>Geoffrey - these sound like exceptionally nasty women to me
No, they really are not that bad, my jealous friend.
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Oh to have been born of woman Geoffrey 
Think you might have got a bit of a scorching
Think you might have got a bit of a scorching
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
lonndubh wrote:
>Think you might have got a bit of a scorching
They were both quite cool, actually. But let us concentrate on the warmth of Karren's beautiful poem.
>Think you might have got a bit of a scorching
They were both quite cool, actually. But let us concentrate on the warmth of Karren's beautiful poem.
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Words that burn
Note to Geoffrey
I see you edited your 2 posts
Maybe others read them and maybe not
by Geoffrey » Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:29 pm
Lucky? Never trust them! It's a snare, a woman's textbook way of booby-trapping any passing fool. Sweeten him up with a soft surrendering personality, then after she's got her claws in the poor bugger and starts making his life Hell does the prize idiot wake up and realise that there's no way out, that his carefree days of cordiality and harmony are over. He's finished.
Maybe you should have deleted them altogether
I think that you are probably just stirring sh1te(as they say here in the midlands)
Come on Geoffrey . Why the sudden turn around
What happens if you decide to goKarren B wrote:I don’t know how long this will last,
I don’t know how long you will stay.
Note to Geoffrey
I see you edited your 2 posts
Maybe others read them and maybe not
To which Geoffrey repliedCate wrote:I think you are both very lucky!
I really like this poem Karren and think that you have expressed yourself beautifully.
by Geoffrey » Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:29 pm
Lucky? Never trust them! It's a snare, a woman's textbook way of booby-trapping any passing fool. Sweeten him up with a soft surrendering personality, then after she's got her claws in the poor bugger and starts making his life Hell does the prize idiot wake up and realise that there's no way out, that his carefree days of cordiality and harmony are over. He's finished.
Maybe you should have deleted them altogether
I think that you are probably just stirring sh1te(as they say here in the midlands)
Come on Geoffrey . Why the sudden turn around
DID THE TWO EXCEPTIONALLY NICE WOMAN SHOW YOU SUCH A GOOD TIME THAT YOU CHANGED YOUR TUNEGeoffrey wrote:That was a very moving poem, Karren. Thank you for sharing. I would like to have written more, but have to meet two exceptionally nice women.
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I read the posts too well done lonndubh!
Like you I thought he was stirring things up so I refrained from posting a reply. I do hope he did have a good time with the two ladies and that they didn't claw him too hard!
Karren B I'm so happy for you I have a feeling you've been through some tough times,so I wish you all the best!
Like you I thought he was stirring things up so I refrained from posting a reply. I do hope he did have a good time with the two ladies and that they didn't claw him too hard!
Karren B I'm so happy for you I have a feeling you've been through some tough times,so I wish you all the best!
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Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
Hi Karren
It looks as if you have taken the advice of number 4 when I read your poem but always remember number 6 and that poems are our fantasies not real life .
Loved the poem btw !
YL
It looks as if you have taken the advice of number 4 when I read your poem but always remember number 6 and that poems are our fantasies not real life .
Loved the poem btw !
YL
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Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Re: Just when you think you’re immune.
lonndubh wrote:
>Note to Geoffrey
>I see you edited your 2 posts
Just corrected a small spelling mistake in the one and a minor grammatical error in the other. No big deal, so I hope no one is going to start stirring things up. It's difficult to trust anybody; at times there are some real unstable characters in here. Let's try and keep things pleasant.
>Note to Geoffrey
>I see you edited your 2 posts
Just corrected a small spelling mistake in the one and a minor grammatical error in the other. No big deal, so I hope no one is going to start stirring things up. It's difficult to trust anybody; at times there are some real unstable characters in here. Let's try and keep things pleasant.