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like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 7:58 pm
by lazariuk
if we could be
for only a moment
but let that moment
be in every single day
if we could be
for that one single moment
cute cute cute
in a silly little way
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:04 pm
by lizzytysh
a simple truth
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:28 pm
by Manna
awwwwwwwww!!!
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:57 pm
by daka
sounds like the moment of your resurrection, Jackie
daka
PS nice poem
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 5:33 am
by Mr. Sunshine
Jack Lazariuk is alive and well, and living in Montreal.
Regards,
Rudolf
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 5:48 am
by lazariuk
Mr. Sunshine wrote:Jack Lazariuk is alive and well, and living in Montreal.
Regards,
Rudolf
That put a big smile on my face.
In honour of love and theft.
jack
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:11 pm
by Cate
I like this very much. I keep coming back to this page to re-read it. I'm going to keep this in my mind today and when I'm having an "Oh my God it's Christmas eve and I didn't...." moment I will remember your words.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 6:24 pm
by mickey_one
lazariuk wrote:if we could be
for only a moment
but let that moment
be in every single day
if we could be
for that one single moment
cute cute cute
in a silly little way
Shares in Hallmark just rose by 50% but despite that I hope that your 2008 is a good one.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 8:10 pm
by Mr. Sunshine
[quote="lazariuk"]if we could be
for only a moment
but let that moment
be in every single day
if we could be
for that one single moment
cute cute cute
in a silly little way[/quote]
[quote="mort shuman in his translation"]
If I could be for only an hour
If I could be for an hour every day
If I could be for just one stinking hour
Cute cute cute
In a stupid ass way[/quote]
As to Jacques Brel himself, I don't know the original French version. I'll assume that our "Jackie" is more literal as Mort Shuman was striving for a musical translation.
Cheers,
Rudolf
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 8:44 pm
by lazariuk
I didn't know the orginal myself as I am not very good with French. I only really came to appreciate the moment two days ago and so made the corrections that I felt were needed to describe the wish it generated. Here is the wish. The moment was given to Winnie.
The wish remains.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 10:26 pm
by lazariuk
mickey_one wrote:lazariuk wrote:if we could be
for only a moment
but let that moment
be in every single day
if we could be
for that one single moment
cute cute cute
in a silly little way
Shares in Hallmark just rose by 50% but despite that I hope that your 2008 is a good one.
Thanks for the greeting Michael. I hope that you get the one implied in my words above.
If you think that a 50% share rise is impressive, just try and imagine the tsunami of love and understanding that would flow your way if I get my wish.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 12:16 am
by linda_lakeside
Oh, sweet, cute, funny jackie! I like that so much I'm going to copy it and put it in my little folder of 'feel goods'.
I no longer know what to wish anyone these days in case it's considered politically/religiously incorrect. Let's just say I came down from the bleachers to say hello. Not much, but far better than getting a fly ball in the eyeball.
Linda.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 12:57 am
by lazariuk
linda_lakeside wrote:Oh, sweet, cute, funny jackie! I like that so much I'm going to copy it and put it in my little folder of 'feel goods'.
I no longer know what to wish anyone these days in case it's considered politically/religiously incorrect. Let's just say I came down from the bleachers to say hello. Not much, but far better than getting a fly ball in the eyeball.
Glad you came. It would be hard for you to see my appreciation from away in the bleachers.
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:45 am
by blonde madonna
Jackie by Brel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cycQL8tkYwA
and by Scott Walker
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_XSXHm4vT4
I laughed when Patsy Stone used this quote to describe her sister Jackie (claiming Brel had written the song for her).
Re: like the time they called me Jackie
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:16 pm
by blonde madonna
Hi Jack
Read this thread quickly and didn't realise at first that it was meant to be a poem.
It is customary to acknowledge the original when you are plagiarising (or paraphrasing).